Publishing my piece

Okay, the name of the piece i'm going to try to get published is "My Collection." You know, the one about the crazy artist. I'm going to try and get it published in the Scholastic Writing thing (the purple book) and also WORD magazine. But before I do, i'm probably going to revise it a little bit more (the "frozen" seems a little repetitive to me, etc.) The audience i'm going for is teenage and young adult readers, probably mostly female, although I think men should enjoy it too. The criteria, well, i'm still a bit confused on that, but I'll tell you about it later, whenever I have it all figured out. Well, I can't remember any other questions I am supposed to answer, so that's all. For now at least.